FINAL SCRIPT

Kirk and Dan: fake punch of camera CUT runs away with dog
CUT
Marris: lying on ground looking pained
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Pub owner: walks across pub whilst Bar Tender: tends to bar
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Villager 1: walks through shop door
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Villager 2 and Dan: walk past and observe furniture shop
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Marris: on floor looking pained
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Beryl: reading book
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Marris: on floor looking pained
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Villager 3: walks into phone box
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Dom and friend: sitting, drinking outside pub
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Marris: on floor looking pained
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Dan: walking out shop
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Dom and friend: sitting outside pub
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Marris: on floor looking pained

The script is necessary to ensure our actors know how to perform to meet our vision.
This is our final script, to make it, we reflected upon our two draft scripts and took what worked from them and got rid of what we thought didn't fit.
For our final script, we've taken most our ideas from the already improved draft script 2. We decided to keep the lack of voiceover at the end, which we showed in our second draft. We found that this really worked in our trailer rough cut, and was like by our target audience. We thought it was more suitable to leave the end silent, with just visual words to display our information, rather than speech. We felt that it rounded the whole trailer off nicely, and the audience would go away being more affected by what they have seen, therefore hopefully making them want to watch the soaps opening episode.

-Lauren Tween and Amy Bowman