This is our second rough cut. We removed a couple of clips that received negative feedback from our target audience such as the second time the person appears from the the phone box. Also, when watching the trailer back, we realised we hadn't removed the audio from the clip at 0:51 so this will have to be corrected for rough cut 3.
Feedback:
- Didn't understand the relevence of the car - 18 year old
- The titles at the end don't look very professional - 30 year old
- I really liked the punch and the man on the floor - 18 year old
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